Friday, September 16, 2011

Haiku Monday: 9/19/2011

I couldn't find a few things I wanted for the videos below -- and the word lends itself to much more than is represented here. If you're on a PC, right click to open links in a new tab or window:

Prologue

John Renbourn

The French Mistake

What a Pair (pardon the sound)

Rules, as Aunty wrote 'em:

First, of course, is the proper [syllabic] scheme of 5-7-5. Next is the use of Kigo, essentially a seasonal reference. Thirdly, the subkect matter is subjective but oughta have a universal ring to it--the best Haiku (accordin' to the Masters) oughta have an "aha!" moment where the reader/ listener recognizes the moment conveyed. An' a final consideration is a "cutting" --a division of the poem into two independent parts, but each enhances the other.
  
On visuals: I've changed my tune from the original posting a few hours ago (Aunty, take note). Of course, feel free to post visuals on your blog, but for them to be considered in the context of the haiku contest, please provide a link to them in the comments section along with your haiku. If it's a short YouTube clip or something from Google images or a photo you've uploaded to a Flickr account, whatever. That saves me the time of going back and forth to your delightful blogs and getting consumed with nonhaiku content, which I invariably do.

As I said, I've selected a topic about which I am ignorant, so visuals could help me understand your verse. Links to your blog, though, will not work in your favor, so don't even go there.

Not for nothing am I the czar -- more than a trace of Russian totalitarianism courses through my veins. 

But I'm not entirely evil: Post as many haiku as you please, all open for judging. Window for entries closes at 11:59pm, Pacific Daylight Time. That's a minute before 3am Tuesday on the U.S. east coast, and god only knows when sometime next week for our dear friend(s) in Australia.


Have at it, funsters. The theme for Haiku Monday is DANCE.


27 comments:

  1. Czar? youse not showin' no mercy?

    least an editor could do is correct mah typos : subject

    But DANCE!! Fun fun....see ya Monday.

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  2. See, Aunty? That's where that dialect stuff'll get you. As an editor I always leave dialect alone, except to query the author. On this side of the factory floor, we never know what's an error and what's intentional. I did fix your "rhyme" scheme, though.

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  3. an' a mercy ya did--fer the sake of the neophytes, it needed a clear directive. Thanky.

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  4. I'se not an atheist--I BELIEVE in editors!

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  5. I'm traveling for the next few days, but I'll try to participate remotely. Good theme. But now I can't get the Don Henley song out of my head!

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  6. congrats on your most recent win.
    i like dance. i will see what i can come up with.

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  7. swaying leaves descend
    sun pirouettes on gold and red
    the aspen retire

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  8. and along the same line as the curmudgeon ....

    gusting radiance
    pirouetting sun kissed leaves
    sighs ... with rake in hand.

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  9. Summer's golden death.
    Frenzied tree limbs whip the air
    in Autumn's mosh pit.

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  10. Fleur was maid of honor:

    Eastertime shindig:
    Pair twirls to their chosen tune —
    First as bride and groom.

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  11. Back right, left, right scuff ....
    sweat trickles and pools in bra.
    dog days hoedown stomp..

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  12. Good night Czar,

    Howdy All.

    Congratulations on your win last week.

    Only one this week. Many in my head, just no time. Dance is a favorite of mine.

    Crisp fall breeze, warm hand
    Just a quick step and a twirl
    Oh sorry, your toe.

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  13. Wheeeee--heah we go--such competition already--excellent entires--this is gonna be a tough one.

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  14. *bows before His Highness*

    Good day, Your Majesty! Here's my entry for this week:

    Dishin' out

    Fine Spoons' arabesque;
    Stir, pour, slide, tip-toe, run... Kling!
    Light up the candles.


    I've never been good with rules.

    Amicalement vĂ´tre!
    Jon

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  15. @Deep Blue: Don't worry. I've been called far worse. And deservedly so.

    :-)

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  16. Joker's WILD:

    OH! Sweet Lucifer!
    Writhe in flames of blasphemy
    Foolish dance of prey

    RafaDe

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  17. @czar: I'm quite fussy myself with French grammar and spelling!

    ;)

    Oh! Hai everyone! Very interesting offerings so far!

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  18. Thanks to Wi-Fi at 40,000 feet:

    Junior high school’s dread:
    Palms sweat and knees knock. We are
    all a Limburger.

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  19. Uncle offers:

    It's our senior Prom
    so, save the last dance for me-
    or walk home tonight.

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  21. UNCLE flings couple more:


    FALL GAMES

    Fourth an' goal to go;
    two seconds left on game clock-
    Dive play! End zone dance.



    YOUNG LOVE

    Last dance, hold her tight;
    does she feel my heart beating-
    Can I steal a kiss?

    (groan: Aunty's re-write

    Last dance, hold her tight;
    does she feel my heart beating?
    Aunty: "Thas' sappy." )

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  22. Apologies for this week, I won't be throwing my hat in the ring... but once a gain the competition is looking fierce...

    I love the theme for this week...

    Good luck everyone...

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  23. HUNTRESS

    The owl swoops through chill
    night air, mice skitter--Ancient
    Choreography

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  24. Supple, green we cling.
    The air cools and the wind blows,
    dry and red we fall.

    ~CoreyJo

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  25. A late entry, hopefully not too late. My life's dance lately:


    Waltz, not a quick step
    here at the end of the day.
    Tempo picks up soon.

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